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Seen and Unseen

Seen And Unseen

new birth, its beauty
sorrows darkest shadow shown
ancient forest burned

Robert J. Lindley
Haiku, ( Eyes and Heart Opened)

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John Michaels

Date: 10/2/2018 5:58:00 AM

Vivid Haiku, Robert - and some nice alliteration! Well done. John.

J.W. Earnings

Date: 8/17/2018 4:28:00 AM

Wow, a great haiku! =) Definitely written brilliantly.

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/13/2018 3:14:00 PM

Just had to read a Haiku of yours Robert, love this.

FJ Thomas

Date: 7/9/2018 3:16:00 PM

Heartbreaking. And yet there's life. Beautiful Robert.

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/6/2018 5:04:00 PM

Dear Robert, a deep, meaningful haiku reminding me of rebirth after darkest despair expressed in the light of shining hope. An exquisite poem of the duality of life’s beauty and sorrows. A multifaceted poem of magnificence. Warmest wishes my friend. ~Susan

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/6/2018 7:20:00 AM

Thank you my friends, one and all for the wonderful comments given on this Haiku.. With writing haiku's being such a recent writing experience for me,I am indeed pleased they have been so well received by poets that I admire.

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 7/5/2018 1:54:00 AM

Amazing and powerful. As long as it is not scorched earth policies...But the that is only when we humans interfere.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2018 1:27:00 PM

Quite profound words in a short haiku form, , Robert.

Silent One

Date: 7/3/2018 12:44:00 PM

A deep sad haiku my friend..

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/3/2018 11:52:00 AM

You have created a masterpiece, loved it. winning wishes for a successful placement.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 7/3/2018 2:12:00 AM

Every new birth is a beauty! A miracle, a grace! Sorrows and shadows dissipate.. it is challenging to capture your profound imagery! A A brilliant Haiku of art and thought! A pleasure to read. Stay safe and blessed Robert.

Lyric Man

Date: 7/3/2018 12:38:00 AM

Hi Robert.. I loved reading your poem this evening with a delightful bedtime tea. I look forward to reading more of your creative works tomorrow.. sleep well!