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A door and a window Will show your shadow All deeds in a row The correct seen it show Where sun plays see-saw Where night show its show Where birds sing their vow Where trees spreads shadow by:- Vrushani Thaker

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Date: 9/2/2010 5:42:00 PM
This is unusal, but I like it. It is a difficult form to categorize, but it is not easy on the surface to do it and you have... Thank you for your kindness. REgards, Gerard.
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Date: 8/8/2010 11:04:00 AM
Nice Poem and beautiful expression of words. Love and best wishes.......Ravindra.......Vrushani Thaker
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