Seen????

A door and a window
Will show your shadow
All deeds in a row
The correct seen it show
Where sun plays see-saw
Where night show its show
Where birds sing their vow
Where trees spreads shadow

                                    by:-
                                    Vrushani Thaker
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Keogh Jr. Avatar
September 2, 2010 at 5:42 PM
This is unusal, but I like it. It is a difficult form to categorize, but it is not easy on the surface to do it and you have... Thank you for your kindness. REgards, Gerard.
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August 8, 2010 at 11:04 AM
Nice Poem and beautiful expression of words. Love and best wishes.......Ravindra.......Vrushani Thaker
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