Seems So Right

Young lovers on a moonlit night
So into each other, love seems so right
Love light dances in their eyes
It doesn't take long to realize

They are holding the love of their life
A man and a woman, one day a husband, one day a wife
The ring sparkles in the moonlit night
Love's embrace that seems so right

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7/9/19
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Gauthier Avatar
July 12, 2019 at 11:21 PM
Sweet poem, Timothy.
Mcguire Avatar
July 12, 2019 at 11:35 PM
Thank you for the many kind words!
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 5:02 PM
Hello Thimothy McGuire, Ah! True love! They are deeply in love. Have a nice day my friend.
Mcguire Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 8:00 PM
Thank you Darlene :)
Craig Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 10:43 AM
you must have found real love to be able to write about it so beautifully. Very nice. - Mike
Mcguire Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 2:38 PM
Thanks Michael!
Cunningham Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 12:02 AM
A very romantic image in your verse Timothy. Tom
Mcguire Avatar
July 9, 2019 at 2:38 PM
Thanks Tom
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