Seemingly You

Someone always has an opinion 
about something , seemingly you  but 
dont let that speak for me 
for when no one believed in me 
that no one that did not see 
any thing the best in   me seemingly you 
you made me strong,  you   encouraged 
you gave opportunity's in the mist 
of some of my wrong's  you were a light 
even when it was said it was 
for someone else like life is just 
a model pattern for one 
You believed  in me non- the less you spoke highly 
even when that no- one was still the 
wrong  your positives  made  the 
best of me  , because you opened 
door's that I could not see 
even when no- one 
that he,  that she,  did not 
speak the best of me to be 
 when hope came for that tomorrow
it was from someone like me 
when I did not have a name but 
shamed  you  , your belief in me 
was what made me the strong 
You were that beacon of hope 
when it was just complain 
when no -one had nothing to 
say but  what was the wrong's 
 because  of our humanness 
we all have been that, the wrong 
the no-one  who did not believe 
in someone when  we knew still
it was wrong
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019


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Date: 5/22/2019 2:30:00 PM
Hello Felicia Hinton, so nice to meet you.Welcome to Poetry Soup. Yes i must say, you have done very well creating this poem. Well done! Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 5/17/2019 7:42:00 PM
Felicia, This part was a poem in herself. If you decide to change anything, please keep this part in exactly as you have written it. "your positives made the best of me , because you opened door's that I could not see " It is perfect!
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