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Seemingly you

Someone always has an opinion about something , seemingly you but dont let that speak for me for when no one believed in me that no one that did not see any thing the best in me seemingly you you made me strong, you encouraged you gave opportunity's in the mist of some of my wrong's you were a light even when it was said it was for someone else like life is just a model pattern for one You believed in me non- the less you spoke highly even when that no- one was still the wrong your positives made the best of me , because you opened door's that I could not see even when no- one that he, that she, did not speak the best of me to be when hope came for that tomorrow it was from someone like me when I did not have a name but shamed you , your belief in me was what made me the strong You were that beacon of hope when it was just complain when no -one had nothing to say but what was the wrong's because of our humanness we all have been that, the wrong the no-one who did not believe in someone when we knew still it was wrong

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Date: 5/22/2019 2:30:00 PM
Hello Felicia Hinton, so nice to meet you.Welcome to Poetry Soup. Yes i must say, you have done very well creating this poem. Well done! Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 5/17/2019 7:42:00 PM
Felicia, This part was a poem in herself. If you decide to change anything, please keep this part in exactly as you have written it. "your positives made the best of me , because you opened door's that I could not see " It is perfect!
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