Seeking Light


Rain
Clings to
The bushes
Like crystal drops
Shining without sun
As it can be
For people
Seeking
Light

Heidi Sands

12/30/23

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December 31, 2023 at 11:32 AM
Beautiful poem that this light might shine unto the heart, soul and minds , great to see you enjoying the beauty in nature around you, for the true beauty begins within to see the beauty around us : )
Sands Avatar
December 31, 2023 at 11:47 AM
Thank you very much Stephan . Happy New Year's Eve :)
Cunningham Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 9:59 PM
Any form of light can lift our spirits even the shiny raindrops that are like drops of shiny silver. Tom
Sands Avatar
December 31, 2023 at 6:00 AM
Yes , you are right. Thank you Tom :)
Empress Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 1:06 PM
As i read this, it’s raining here too. And as someone that isnt a fan of rain, your beautiful ninette made me see it from a deeper sight. Just like people seeking light when all is dark, rain too clings to bushes like crystals. How stunning and soulful is that, absolutely loved reading this, sending you light always
Sands Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 2:03 PM
Thank you very much! It was gray for days and drizzly with snow today. Then, the sky cleared some and the sun came out just in time for the sunset. :)
Greenhough Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 1:01 PM
A very inspirational poem. Thanks for the insight.
Sands Avatar
December 30, 2023 at 2:01 PM
Thank you Hilda. Have a nice evening :)
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