Seeking Happiness

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SEEKING HAPPINESS

FROM MY ROOFTOP GARDEN, 29 JANUARY 2017, MY POEM, ©

Happiness he seeks Life's joyces sacrifices Emptiness his gain! © Demetrios Trifiatis 29 January 2017

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Therese Bacha

Date: 1/29/2017 6:12:00 PM

Happiness he seeks Life's joyces sacrifices Emptiness his gain! Still the same Demetrios even after a long year ago, i still feel so touched to read your very few words that have so so much meanings to ones own life. Yes emptiness we gain, as it surrounds us always everywhere. Beautiful, so sad, love the flowers. Old friend Terry xoxo

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/30/2017 5:52:00 AM

A young lady like you dear, Therese, has every right to call me old! I am delighted to see you again my friend! Hope it's better in the warm California than in the freezing Montreal! haha! Thank you!

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/29/2017 5:27:00 PM

WoW! Demetrios, This was so profound. I enjoyed the read. A without a doubt seven and fav:-) Alexis

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/29/2017 11:11:00 AM

brillant poetry, such wisdom.

Probir Gupta

Date: 1/29/2017 8:15:00 AM

We come across many happy carpenters and clerks and unhappy kings and presidents ... What generates happiness is almost like what enables a flower to bloom ... Your haiku is very poetically said though ...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/29/2017 6:28:00 AM

- Those who do not find happiness ... a sad fact - A great poem, my friend - hugs & 7 // Anne-Lise :)