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SEEKING BLACK A worn out time machine goes frightfully awry, Instead of arriving in Victorian era, I land with a bump, In a dark, deep, dingy, wet, smelly cave, tried to spy! Recognized Greek mythology, Medusa be kind to me! I hear screams, a shadow of head and snakes I see, Think back, don’t’ look, you’ll turn to stone, a black lump! Perseus my handsome Greek hero, where are you, Come this way soon, if not, for me there will be sorrow. She screams like a wild beast, will my fate be like the few? Suddenly I see Perseus with a shield and a sword, Shines his shield in Medusa’s face, hits the desired chord, Chops head with bloody sword, machine and I will see morrow! For Deep and Dark Poetry Contest (Lu Loo)

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Date: 1/14/2019 5:34:00 PM
A dark mythical journey.. Congrats on your win Jennifer..
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Date: 1/14/2019 11:24:00 PM
Thank-you so much Joseph, will make a call on your page. Congrats to you also for a 1st placing. Going to read yours now. Poetry hugs, Jennifer
Date: 1/14/2019 4:39:00 PM
Very powerful and well-written, Jennifer! Congratulations on your fine win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/14/2019 11:28:00 PM
Thank-you Sandra and congratulations to you also on a 1st placing. An absolutely great write! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 1/11/2019 3:49:00 PM
You have certainly written a deep and dark poem, Jenny! I love the content and the way you presented it. gl in the contest. Warm regards // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 1/14/2019 10:24:00 AM
Pleased to be back with congratulations on your podium finish, Jenny. Well done! Warm regards // paul
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 1/11/2019 11:49:00 PM
Thank-you Paul, that means a lot to me coming from you. My husband knows a lot more about Greek mythology so had a lesson before i wrote the poem! All the best for the contest with you also. I have strong competition, so many excellent ones went in! Warm regards, Jennifer
Date: 12/31/2018 3:36:00 AM
Definitely Deep and Dark. Well written Jenny, with your words I could actually visualize what all happened in the cave. Big thumbs up. Kim
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Date: 12/31/2018 7:07:00 AM
Thanks Kim - Medusa is a nasty one. Hope you have an awesome tonight and relax tomorrow. Love and poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 12/30/2018 8:17:00 PM
A wonderful entry for the contest Jennifer. Lu Loo is sure to appreciate this gem! Have a Happy New Year my friend! We have our New Year last here in Hawaii and I always enjoy watching the different countries ring in the new year. I know you celebrate Big Time Down Under! Blessings, Connie : )
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Date: 12/31/2018 7:02:00 AM
Thank-you Connie my friend for your kind words and wishes. Hawaii must be awesome to live in, fun, sun and sea - so wonderful. We live in South Africa, Johannesburg and am not sure of the time difference we have but have a good one and a restful, peaceful day tomorrow. Love and poetry hugs, Jennifer
Date: 12/30/2018 1:12:00 PM
Deep and dark, well written Jennifer, I think Robert has given you inspiration. Good luck in the contest. Tom.
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Date: 12/31/2018 6:46:00 AM
Hi Tom, yes maybe he has! Thank-you for your good luck wishes and hope 2019 comes in with a bang, and of course peace to all. love and poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 12/30/2018 12:55:00 PM
Ah, deep and dark. The imagery will be giving me nightmares tonight, my friend.
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Date: 12/31/2018 6:42:00 AM
Hi my friend, Glad i had the desired effect, but no nightmares tonight, only joyous thoughts! Lots of love, Jennifer.
Date: 12/30/2018 10:03:00 AM
wow, a really striking piece, jen... well done!.. have a grand new year!...huggs
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 12/31/2018 6:33:00 AM
Thanks Nette, Glad you enjoyed my deep and dark - have an awesome New Year's Eve and a great day tomorrow, Love and poetry hugs , Jennifer.
Date: 12/30/2018 7:47:00 AM
That is quite the nightmare, Jennifer. Well penned.
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Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 12/31/2018 6:28:00 AM
I was asked deep and dark - nightmares were my intention, but not for this time of year i'm sorry! A great New Years Eve tonight and a peaceful family day tomorrow, Poetry hugs and wishes, Jennifer.

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