Winged Warrior Poet Rhyme

Seeking Black

I walk the corridors of the nefarious night
Where warring angels guard the gilded gates
Thus demons arise with their fallacious flight
Do I enter beyond the vanquishable void?
For which I seek diminished and destroyed
My heart enslaved as mind divided dominates

The guardians give permission to eagerly encroach
As my soul separates within the abdominous abyss
The darkness descends upon a cadaverous coach
Infinity stands before me like a denunciative dream
The blackness fills the sanctimonious silent stream
For I have been betrayed by the Judas killer kiss.



...before we see the true light we shall experience the real dark...



Dec.24.2018
Rhyme Time 7- Deep and Dark 
Sponsored by: Lu Loo


...I know this verse is a little dark for this time of the season...but hey she asked for deep and dark lol...

(((((HAPPY HOLIDAYS!!! MY DEAR FRIENDS...MERRY CHRISTMAS)))))


Placed 1'st...Thank You

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Gershon Wolf January 23, 2019 at 8:29 PM Rhyme-time poetry pastime! Darkness is relative: What if this great write had never seen the 'light of day?' … Belated congrats on your win in the contest! ~ Gershon

Brandy Nicole January 15, 2019 at 6:45 PM Even though your muse likes to linger in the darkness, follow a shadow. I love that you can write about anything and everything. Your thoughts shine my dear friend. Congratulations on this win. Love and seeking the Light. :) Brandy

Heidi Sands January 14, 2019 at 5:27 PM Congratulations for your win WW! :)

Sandra Haight January 14, 2019 at 4:28 PM Dark, deep for sure, and so well-written, ^WW^. Congratulations on your First Place win in the contest. Hugs, Sandra

Wren Rushing January 14, 2019 at 3:54 PM I Have to tell you there were some great poems in this contest but yours was my favorite! A fav!

Jennifer Proxenos December 27, 2018 at 9:29 AM Powerful and profound poetry W.W. Darkness and evil usually hang out together - fascinating imagery. Best of luck in the contest , loved it. Best wishes and poetry hugs, Jennifer

James Edward Lee Sr. December 26, 2018 at 6:28 PM Just wow, you have established yourself as a master of the quill so to speak... Profound....as well as deep.. Write On James

Silent One December 26, 2018 at 8:28 AM Dark, but so poetic... Is this an insight into your mind? lol.

Carolyn Devonshire December 25, 2018 at 4:20 AM Definitely dark, but also well penned with great alliteration and powerful imagery. Especially admire the "sanctimonious silent stream." Best wishes in Lu's contest, WW. And Merry Christmas! Hugs, Carolyn

Brandy Nicole December 24, 2018 at 10:07 PM It seems as though darkness is the wind beneath those Warrior Wings of yours. (Just saying) As you certainly know how to caress such a moment. Don't stay in the depth too long, my friend. Lol. Gotta breathe sometime. Love with some darkness. :) Brandy

Charlie Smith December 24, 2018 at 4:02 PM Merry Christmas WW, peace be with you...

Lawrence Sharp December 24, 2018 at 11:23 AM I always love the dark ones, regardless of the timing. Your words are so well chosen, excellent work.

Kim Rodrigues December 24, 2018 at 10:21 AM Dark or not, it is well written! I for one, enjoy creativity and that’s what poetry is about. For certainly the Lord entered that dark place for us so we can have eternal light through Him and in Him! Be blessed!

Vijay Pandit December 24, 2018 at 9:59 AM Written in your usual creative style..your poems never disappoint my friend..well written, WW. Happy Holidays..Merry Christmas.

John Gondolf December 24, 2018 at 7:30 AM An excellent write for the contest, WW, best of luck. My muse is having a hard time thinking of anything dark right now. Merry Christmas my friend. John