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SEEING AND ASKING:

A TANKA-SENRYU FREEFLOW 

 

Pandemonium, 

Has become common today.

What a confused life:

Warrior mindsets halting

Thoughts of peaceful sojourning:- 

 

Negativity 

Has blackened enlightenment:

Blocking out guidance:-

Time to set our minds on fire

With biblical memoirs:-

 

Let us remember

Both Sodom and Gomorrah:

Saving our nation:-

Today, things are really bad;

We must not let them get worse:-

 

Always remember, 

God will help out all those who 

Seek out His help:-

 

Let’s get to asking,

Knocking reparation’s door:

Deliverance opening:-

 

SEEKING AND ASKING: A TANKA AND SENRYU FREEFLOW

SEEING AND ASKING:
A TANKA-SENRYU FREEFLOW  

Pandemonium, 
Has become common today.
What a confused life:
Warrior mindsets halting
Thoughts of peaceful sojourning:- 

Negativity 
Has blackened enlightenment:
Blocking out guidance:-
Time to set our minds on fire
With biblical memoirs:-

Let us remember
Both Sodom and Gomorrah:
Saving our nation:-
Today, things are really bad;
We must not let them get worse:-

Always remember, 
God will help out all those who 
Seek out His help:-

Let’s get to asking,
Knocking reparation’s door:
Deliverance opening:-
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