CayCay Godwin Poet Rhyme

Seeking a Clue

Hope seeking a clue, I pursue 

cloudy truths within your fickle climate.

When I try to riot your depths of private,

your sky-air raises flared hints of midnight blue

that shape breezy, vague tints atop views of you.

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Paula Goldsmith June 3, 2021 at 9:47 AM I found and enjoyed your climate rhyme write. I have missed reading your writes. Hope you are OK. May you be blessed..........

Andrea Dietrich April 24, 2020 at 8:44 PM very COOL poem, Caycay. This snippet from Your Fickle climate. I really like this. Also enjoyed that phrasing of riot your depths of private and how you rhymed it with climate. Creative!

Vijay Pandit April 22, 2020 at 7:13 AM Superb done CayCay--enjoyed how you weaved your words...hints of midnight blue....vague tints atop views of you--awesome. CayCay Godwin April 22, 2020 at 2:21 PM Thank you, Vijay, for your encouraging comments. Always love your visits. Peace and health and peaceful health ... CayCay

Gershon Wolf April 21, 2020 at 7:54 PM 'to riot… tints of blue' -- very intriguing turns of phrase(s) here, CayCay. ~ Mr. Bummer, who went 'there' (lol). CayCay Godwin April 21, 2020 at 7:59 PM I've forgiven you! Perhaps, I'll find Mr. Humorous when next I visit you? Be good to yourself ... CayCay