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Seeking a Clue

Hope seeking a clue, I pursue cloudy truths within your fickle climate. When I try to riot your depths of private, your sky-air raises flared hints of midnight blue that shape breezy, vague tints atop views of you.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/3/2021 9:47:00 AM

I found and enjoyed your climate rhyme write. I have missed reading your writes. Hope you are OK. May you be blessed..........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/24/2020 8:44:00 PM

very COOL poem, Caycay. This snippet from Your Fickle climate. I really like this. Also enjoyed that phrasing of riot your depths of private and how you rhymed it with climate. Creative!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/22/2020 7:13:00 AM

Superb done CayCay--enjoyed how you weaved your words...hints of midnight blue....vague tints atop views of you--awesome.

CayCay Jennings
Date: 4/22/2020 2:21:00 PM

Thank you, Vijay, for your encouraging comments. Always love your visits. Peace and health and peaceful health ... CayCay

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/21/2020 7:54:00 PM

'to riot… tints of blue' -- very intriguing turns of phrase(s) here, CayCay. ~ Mr. Bummer, who went 'there' (lol).

CayCay Jennings
Date: 4/21/2020 7:59:00 PM

I've forgiven you! Perhaps, I'll find Mr. Humorous when next I visit you? Be good to yourself ... CayCay