Seeking

My mind seeks tranquility
My soul seeks a place of peace
I yearn to hear the birds singing
Feel the warmth of the sun and a breeze that does not cease
Is there such a place?
My mind is full of doubt
Believe in me 
Let’s be free
Hold my hand 
We will thoroughly search for this land
Soon enough we will find out
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Ashley-Garn Avatar
November 28, 2009 at 7:09 PM
hmm.. i liked it! it seemed like it sirectly came from your current train of thought :) and in reality people DO look for a place as you have described and to involve someone In your search it makes it more realistic...:) keep on writing!! lol because you will make it...you will do far! -Ciara :)
Brown Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 10:14 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today . I enjoyed reading it. Love, CarolJames
Kendrick Avatar
October 7, 2009 at 5:17 AM
It would be hard to find this day and age. Keep writing. Sara
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