Seeking

My mind seeks tranquility My soul seeks a place of peace I yearn to hear the birds singing Feel the warmth of the sun and a breeze that does not cease Is there such a place? My mind is full of doubt Believe in me Let’s be free Hold my hand We will thoroughly search for this land Soon enough we will find out

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Ciara Aiyana Ashley-Garn

Date: 11/28/2009 7:09:00 PM

hmm.. i liked it! it seemed like it sirectly came from your current train of thought :) and in reality people DO look for a place as you have described and to involve someone In your search it makes it more realistic...:) keep on writing!! lol because you will make it...you will do far! -Ciara :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/7/2009 10:14:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today . I enjoyed reading it. Love, CarolJames

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/7/2009 5:17:00 AM

It would be hard to find this day and age. Keep writing. Sara