Seek

I need so badly, what makes me sick What breaks me down What makes me weak I seek so desperately, what doesn’t exist What I don’t’ deserve What I’ll never reach And yet I can’t bear to think Of life without this silly thing That makes feel Like I’m complete But love, it seems, I’ll never see

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Skat A

Date: 5/7/2016 2:06:00 AM

tayler, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. *SKAT*

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/29/2016 11:07:00 PM

Tayler, Well done. Glad to read your poem today. :) Love -LINDA-

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/9/2009 7:13:00 PM

Tayler, I love this poem and hope you find your true love soon! Bless you, Carolyn

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 2/27/2009 8:30:00 PM

This shows great expression and depth, a very nice piece.

Lena Townsend

Date: 2/27/2009 8:25:00 PM

This is so wonderfully written and yet so sad. It starts out leading one to think that the subject has an addiction that can not be appeased and ends with the one thing that we all truly need. I love it... adding to my favs. It touched my soul. Thanks for sharing. Smiles from Lolita