Seeing Within the Poet

Each morning I come here with thoughts in my head
Of reading and writing, discussing what’s said
As eyes open wide and the heart does so, too
I feel all your words and the sentiments bled

The feelings, the passion, the moods, the ideals
Allows me, the reader, to experience and feel
I am actually able to then see in your head 
Many dreams that you have and the things that are real
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Torres Avatar
October 31, 2008 at 10:36 PM
Very nice Michael. We have something special to say. When it's said it touches us in so many different ways. Nice poem. Blessings Michael Torres
Reynolds Avatar
October 30, 2008 at 6:15 PM
I know, isn't it cool! LOVE tht the information age has brought us to here..lovely, Michael, love Kristin
Hart Avatar
October 30, 2008 at 10:08 AM
beautiful michael
Richards Avatar
October 30, 2008 at 8:47 AM
Isn't it amazing, how as strangers in the outside world, we have come here to share something so deep inside ourselves with our friends on this wonderful venue? It is so special....this sharing of our inner selves. Blessings this morning. ~Carrie
Jordan Avatar
October 30, 2008 at 6:24 AM
Michael I reckon this short poem says a awful lot about your heart - You are a treasure my friend - God Bless
Kelly Avatar
October 30, 2008 at 5:31 AM
I believe you really can , Michael . Thanks for your kind words and observations . Your last line to my haiku is good . I left it as it was because of the W alliteration ....
Higgins Avatar
October 30, 2008 at 5:31 AM
The soup allow is to expereince other people's dreams and thoughts, along with all their passions, and moods. You wrote this very well Michael.
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