Seeing the Light

---another one from a few years ago done for english---

I look outside to see the light Down here in the darkest night Never to be let go I wonder if anyone’ll know Trapped inside my anger burned The kindling being turned Never to know any joy I am trapped inside with no toy I live inside a deep dark cave Where I sit and my feelings are paved Never alive will I be When you are here with me
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Rozario Avatar
October 21, 2012 at 9:11 AM
Wow this is really dark...dig it a lot. Very nice rhyming...the last stanza is just superb! Awesome write queen of darkness!...;)
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February 8, 2012 at 7:13 PM
Very interesting one indeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed. Da!~ Always, Laura
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