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Seeing Stars

Seeing stars dance with purple scars Dust it with bits of wonder lightning and thunder a thin line in between rain and rainbows cross through for endless tears that can never hear I love you

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Daver Austin

Date: 5/2/2014 11:19:00 AM

Wishful words, short and sweet. Congrats on the selection. daver

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/28/2014 5:56:00 AM

Awesome write, Congrats on your poem being featured this week, Karen

Anthony Beesley

Date: 7/28/2010 2:00:00 PM

short and sweet with a faint sparkle of poetic genius

Sheol Moribund

Date: 11/24/2009 11:44:00 AM

Dear Karen: I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed your poem. I really liked the line "a thin line between rain and rainbows". This reminds me of a poem that I wrote called Between A Tear and A Smile. Great job!!! yours truly: Sheol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/24/2009 10:01:00 AM

That is right the scars of emotion. Keep the creative flow coming. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/24/2009 4:13:00 AM

Wonderful poetry you present to us today Karen. I hope your week finds you with an overflow of inspiration which you may use to inspire others. Love and blessings to you, Carol

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 11/23/2009 6:15:00 AM

excellent , Karen. excellent. Did a double take on this one. -Robert

Tim Ryerson

Date: 11/23/2009 4:40:00 AM

Very well done, Karen!...looking forward reading more....Tim

Anthony Nutter

Date: 11/23/2009 3:32:00 AM

Very nice poem. Enjoyed reading this morning. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit