Seeing Stars

Seeing stars dance
with purple scars
Dust it with bits of wonder
lightning and thunder
a thin line in between
rain and rainbows
cross through for endless tears 
that can never hear
I love you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Austin Avatar
May 2, 2014 at 11:19 AM
Wishful words, short and sweet. Congrats on the selection. daver
Mehta Avatar
April 28, 2014 at 5:56 AM
Awesome write, Congrats on your poem being featured this week, Karen
Beesley Avatar
July 28, 2010 at 2:00 PM
short and sweet with a faint sparkle of poetic genius
Moribund Avatar
November 24, 2009 at 11:44 AM
Dear Karen: I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed your poem. I really liked the line "a thin line between rain and rainbows". This reminds me of a poem that I wrote called Between A Tear and A Smile. Great job!!! yours truly: Sheol
Kendrick Avatar
November 24, 2009 at 10:01 AM
That is right the scars of emotion. Keep the creative flow coming. Sara
Brown Avatar
November 24, 2009 at 4:13 AM
Wonderful poetry you present to us today Karen. I hope your week finds you with an overflow of inspiration which you may use to inspire others. Love and blessings to you, Carol
Dufresne Avatar
November 23, 2009 at 6:15 AM
excellent , Karen. excellent. Did a double take on this one. -Robert
Ryerson Avatar
November 23, 2009 at 4:40 AM
Very well done, Karen!...looking forward reading more....Tim
Nutter Avatar
November 23, 2009 at 3:32 AM
Very nice poem. Enjoyed reading this morning. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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