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Seeing Is Beliving

I wish that you could see behind my eyes And into the dark corners of my mind You would see all the pain,misery, and saddness That swims in and out If you could see my memories And relive them each night. Then you would know why my wrist are slit I wish you knew what I've been through. Maybe then you could understand the things I do End

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/16/2009 12:29:00 PM
Good job, nice write, I like this poem...glad that you like Do You Believe In Ghost...a true story that I did not make up...Danny
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Date: 6/11/2009 6:54:00 PM
this is exactley how i feel! this is really good!
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Date: 6/9/2009 5:15:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2009 7:45:00 AM
"You would see all the pain,misery, and saddness That swims in and out " I actually that line a very strong metaphor.Rockin'
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