Seeing Is Beliving

I wish that you could see behind my eyes
And into the dark corners of my mind
You would see all the pain,misery, and saddness
That swims in and out
If you could see my memories
And relive them each night.
Then you would know why my wrist are slit
I wish you knew what I've been through.
Maybe then you could understand the things I do
End
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Nunn Avatar
October 16, 2009 at 12:29 PM
Good job, nice write, I like this poem...glad that you like Do You Believe In Ghost...a true story that I did not make up...Danny
Wisehart Avatar
June 11, 2009 at 6:54 PM
this is exactley how i feel! this is really good!
Brown Avatar
June 9, 2009 at 5:15 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
Al-Riyami Avatar
June 8, 2009 at 7:45 AM
"You would see all the pain,misery, and saddness That swims in and out " I actually that line a very strong metaphor.Rockin'
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