David Crandall Poet Rhyme

Seeing in Black and White

I see life in black and white.
I know I'm positively right - 
except the times when I'm not,
as when I'm negatively wrought.
Then, positivity, I lack,
and I see life in white and black.

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Gershon Wolf December 1, 2025 at 9:24 PM Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha, ha. A FAVE, Dave! David Crandall December 4, 2025 at 4:01 PM Thanks, Gershon!

CayCay Godwin November 30, 2025 at 7:11 PM That happens to me, too. Glad to know I'm not alone. Then, people eat snacks, dogs chase cats and everything goes back to black (isn't that a stone's song, 'back to black'? I dunno) David Crandall November 30, 2025 at 8:52 PM haha, I like the part about eating snacks best! the Stones is "paint it black", but "back to black" sounds familiar.

Hilda Greenhough November 29, 2025 at 9:36 PM This is a cute poem with a nice turnaround. David Crandall November 30, 2025 at 8:52 PM Thanks, Hilda!