Seedling

A tiny seed deep in the Earth starving for the light Pushing hard against the soil one day springs to life Looking like a fragile twig not knowing where to go Standing still for all the world will soon, put on a show.....

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 1/12/2016 5:37:00 PM

G'day Pete ... oh yes, the journey begins. Thank you Pete - Lindsay

Pete Yuhas
Date: 3/1/2016 3:21:00 PM

Thank you Lindsay, much appreciated.

A. Juman

Date: 11/9/2015 3:54:00 AM

Excellent my friend you are there pete

Pete Yuhas
Date: 12/10/2015 12:50:00 PM

Thank you A. Zaladin.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/7/2015 6:23:00 AM

Yes, that tiny sprout is just waiting to put on its show..Enjoyed reading this one..Reads like a winner if for a contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Pete Yuhas
Date: 12/10/2015 12:49:00 PM

Thank you Sara. Haven't entered anything, still learning how to navigate the Soup.

Pete Yuhas
Date: 12/10/2015 12:47:00 PM

Thank you Sara. Haven't entered anything, still learning how to navigate the Soup.