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Seed of Concern

My Lord,

Give us the will
To overcome our heartless indifference for
Those who suffer 

So as 

Able us to be,
In the ever-stretching desert of apathy, your  
Seed of concern to sow! 



© Demetrios Trifiatis
   02 NOVEMBER 2014

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Gary Bateman

Date: 11/6/2014 4:45:00 PM

Demetrios, A most wise and moving message indeed. Our World and the many who suffer each day and night makes one want to cry. My fervent hope is that we can all change this one day!! Best Wishes Always, Gary

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/3/2014 1:22:00 PM

A compassionate poem from a loving heart. Beautiful!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/3/2014 1:45:00 PM

Thank you, Connie, for your heartfelt comment!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 11/3/2014 8:19:00 AM

amen beautifully penned pal

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/3/2014 8:24:00 AM

Thank you, Liam, my good friend! Thank you for sharing the idea of concern!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 11/3/2014 6:46:00 AM

Always a beautiful message there Demetrios! Loved ur write!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/3/2014 8:00:00 AM

Dr. Upma, it's so nice to see you again! Thank you for your visit and loving comment!

David Meade

Date: 11/2/2014 5:25:00 PM

A prayer from the heart never goes without answer. May the spirit embolden us to action. Loved the poem. Thank-you.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/3/2014 12:25:00 AM

Yes, it is true my friend, David! Thank you for visiting and commenting!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/2/2014 5:17:00 PM

Wise words and beautiful message one must ponder about,Awesme !

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/3/2014 12:28:00 AM

My dearest, Charmaine, it is always a pleasure to receive your visit . Thank you for your kind and generous comment!

Dan Helppi

Date: 11/2/2014 12:47:00 PM

Very nice message Demetrios, well put!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/3/2014 12:29:00 AM

Thank you, Dan, for visiting and commenting!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/2/2014 11:32:00 AM

- Amen ! - A beautiful poem, gives "food" to our own thoughts - Well done my friend Demetrios - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/3/2014 12:32:00 AM

My dear friend, Anne-Lise, I know how kind your heart is! Thank you for your heartfelt comment!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 11/2/2014 10:48:00 AM

Hi Demetrios! Yes, we both know that there's a lot of this and that around, and suffering and much pain is sadly one of them and always been. We live for most part in a very sad world filled of so much selfishness and materialism. Too much of it that so many discard true love for those.Your poem show so much caring, my dear friend. My heart breaks too to all that's is been of valued ignored by so many. Excellent poem! Have a great Sunday! Love and hugs!;) xxxx D.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 11/3/2014 12:36:00 AM

Dorian, my kind friend, your sensitivity is clearly seen throughout your comment! May God bless you for that! Thank you for your gracious visit and warm comment! Love and hugs to you too!

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