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Like a painting. Almost the same thing, Except not so flat. And more than that- Blooming effortlessly. As if by destiny. But its true fate, Is for its beauty to abate. That is what happens to an eclipse. After a moment, time will elapse. Colors that move on. Feels like waking up at dawn. This afternoon, Is not full of doom. Just a moment of shade. Harkening a halo of jade. Thank you sun, thank you moon. We hope to see another show soon!

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Date: 4/15/2024 10:07:00 AM
Your poetry is like an eclipse emerging from darkness. I hope to read your words soon.
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Date: 4/12/2024 4:30:00 PM
Hello Angelica, This is a fabulous poem that I enjoyed reading. Well written with joyful rhymes - and totally topical (in the US). Loved 'Just a moment of shade' - there it is, right there... And I can only encourage your undoubted talent...Nic
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