See You Soon

Like a painting.
Almost the same thing,
Except not so flat.
And more than that-
Blooming effortlessly.
As if by destiny.
But its true fate,
Is for its beauty to abate.
That is what happens to an eclipse.
After a moment, time will elapse.
Colors that move on.
Feels like waking up at dawn.
This afternoon,
Is not full of doom.
Just a moment of shade.
Harkening a halo of jade.
Thank you sun, thank you moon.
We hope to see another show soon!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Xiang Avatar
April 15, 2024 at 10:07 AM
Your poetry is like an eclipse emerging from darkness. I hope to read your words soon.
Ruiz Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 4:30 PM
Hello Angelica, This is a fabulous poem that I enjoyed reading. Well written with joyful rhymes - and totally topical (in the US). Loved 'Just a moment of shade' - there it is, right there... And I can only encourage your undoubted talent...Nic
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