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See the Old Man Thomas

See the Old Man Thomas As he burns his brain With a glimmering glass And a ratteling chain Behind white horses In a New York bar Between a setting sun And a falling star No use in raging Over dying light Old Thomas won't But the young men might He will go gently Into the black Just stumble ahead And never look back See the Old Man Thomas - wild and gray He bought nothing - but he had to pay Lets bury him down In sand and clay Say a quick prayer And be on our way In the heavy traffic In the crowded street In the dark cafes Where lovers meet Old Thomas walk Up around the bends Where silence sings And music ends We'll have fun At his funeral soon Dance all night By the bright blue moon We'll read his poems For old time's sake And sing at the grave And sleep at the wake See the Old Man Thomas - wild and gray His whole life happend - yesterday Lets bury him down In sand and clay Say a quick prayer And be on our way The Old Man Thomas Is gone for sure One last drink Then he closed the door No new words From his drunken pen And nobody knows If we'll meet again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/3/2014 1:58:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup, Steinar. Here's hoping you enjoy getting to know people in this community, Keep writing and enjoy reading the poetry of others. If you comment on other's poems, many will return the favor. Best wishes.
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Date: 6/2/2014 5:28:00 AM
Enjoyed the write. congrats on your poem being featured this week,
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Date: 5/30/2014 11:31:00 PM
Steinar,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Steinar Gismeroy Olafsen
Date: 6/2/2014 12:46:00 AM
Thank you for your great welcome SKAT A. Today I received a note that could tell me that this poem, "See The Old Man Thomas" is being featured on the PoetrySoup home page this week! I could't ever wish for a better welcome... :-)
Date: 5/30/2014 7:36:00 AM
- Hei Steinar ! - Velkommen til P-Soup. - Du er dyktig å skrive dikt (ikke første gang du skriver, det kan jeg se ) - Håper du vil poste mange flere dikt i fremtiden. - Hyggelig å få flere Norske "poeter"med her på denne siden. - Hilsen fra Haugesund :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/30/2014 2:43:00 PM
- Ikke her på P-Soup - Det er bare mellom oss vi kan skrive på Norsk..... ingen andre vil forså ..... :))) - Men vi har "Dikt.no" (jeg har aldri postet mine dikt der) - Velkommen til å lese mine små "kjøkken bord dikt" - Anne-Lise :)
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Steinar Gismeroy Olafsen
Date: 5/30/2014 7:58:00 AM
Takk for det Anne Lise. Joda jeg har skrevet i mange mange år, både norsk og engelsk - og har et lokalt rockandroll band som bruker det jeg skriver på engelsk - og det er artig å høre sine egne ord på Spotify/iTunes etc.. :-) Finnes det et tilsvarende sted man kan skrive på norsk?
Date: 5/30/2014 7:06:00 AM
a lovley jolly poem, was nice to read, and flows really good. welcome to poetry soup
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Steinar Gismeroy Olafsen
Date: 5/30/2014 7:13:00 AM
Thank you, Diane! Nice to hear. I feel a little uneasy writing in a foreign language, but I like English - and some of my writings is for a local rock-and-roll band - and they want it in English, of course...
Date: 5/30/2014 7:00:00 AM
Steinar, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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