See the Old Man Thomas

See the Old Man Thomas
As he burns his brain 
With a glimmering glass
And a ratteling chain
Behind white horses
In a New York bar
Between a setting sun
And a falling star

No use in raging 
Over dying light
Old Thomas won't
But the young men might
He will go gently 
Into the black
Just stumble ahead
And never look back

See the Old Man Thomas 
- wild and gray
He bought nothing 
- but he had to pay
Lets bury him down 
In sand and clay
Say a quick prayer 
And be on our way

In the heavy traffic 
In the crowded street
In the dark cafes 
Where lovers meet
Old Thomas walk
Up around the bends
Where silence sings
And music ends

We'll have fun
At his funeral soon
Dance all night
By the bright blue moon
We'll read his poems
For old time's sake
And sing at the grave
And sleep at the wake

See the Old Man Thomas 
- wild and gray
His whole life happend 
- yesterday
Lets bury him down 
In sand and clay
Say a quick prayer 
And be on our way

The Old Man Thomas
Is gone for sure
One last drink
Then he closed the door
No new words 
From his drunken pen
And nobody knows
If we'll meet again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/3/2014 1:58:00 PM
Welcome to PoetrySoup, Steinar. Here's hoping you enjoy getting to know people in this community, Keep writing and enjoy reading the poetry of others. If you comment on other's poems, many will return the favor. Best wishes.
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Date: 6/2/2014 5:28:00 AM
Enjoyed the write. congrats on your poem being featured this week,
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Date: 5/30/2014 11:31:00 PM
Steinar,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Steinar Gismeroy Olafsen
Date: 6/2/2014 12:46:00 AM
Thank you for your great welcome SKAT A. Today I received a note that could tell me that this poem, "See The Old Man Thomas" is being featured on the PoetrySoup home page this week! I could't ever wish for a better welcome... :-)
Date: 5/30/2014 7:36:00 AM
- Hei Steinar ! - Velkommen til P-Soup. - Du er dyktig å skrive dikt (ikke første gang du skriver, det kan jeg se ) - Håper du vil poste mange flere dikt i fremtiden. - Hyggelig å få flere Norske "poeter"med her på denne siden. - Hilsen fra Haugesund :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/30/2014 2:43:00 PM
- Ikke her på P-Soup - Det er bare mellom oss vi kan skrive på Norsk..... ingen andre vil forså ..... :))) - Men vi har "Dikt.no" (jeg har aldri postet mine dikt der) - Velkommen til å lese mine små "kjøkken bord dikt" - Anne-Lise :)
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Steinar Gismeroy Olafsen
Date: 5/30/2014 7:58:00 AM
Takk for det Anne Lise. Joda jeg har skrevet i mange mange år, både norsk og engelsk - og har et lokalt rockandroll band som bruker det jeg skriver på engelsk - og det er artig å høre sine egne ord på Spotify/iTunes etc.. :-) Finnes det et tilsvarende sted man kan skrive på norsk?
Date: 5/30/2014 7:06:00 AM
a lovley jolly poem, was nice to read, and flows really good. welcome to poetry soup
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Steinar Gismeroy Olafsen
Date: 5/30/2014 7:13:00 AM
Thank you, Diane! Nice to hear. I feel a little uneasy writing in a foreign language, but I like English - and some of my writings is for a local rock-and-roll band - and they want it in English, of course...
Date: 5/30/2014 7:00:00 AM
Steinar, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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