see jane run

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   i can hear thuh splash 
             already
         yourn pretty
              feets
      'cross thuh creek

             Smack
             oh my 
       thoze were lips
             Splat
        'gainst mine
             cheek
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Wolf Avatar
March 30, 2025 at 7:46 PM
Wish I had this to read back in 1955!! ~ Go, Spot, Go! ~ Richard Dick
Peranteau Avatar
March 30, 2025 at 7:49 PM
I wuzn't thought uv sir in 1955 ')...oh, and I had something to say 'bout spot ;) much love
Kendrick Avatar
March 29, 2025 at 1:16 PM
Ahhh!! Nice to be greeted with a kiss unless kisser's name Judas. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
Peranteau Avatar
March 29, 2025 at 8:51 PM
') ty
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