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See As You and Me

I have almost gone to ground Discontent, with sound The winter’s melody, reverb Returning here again See as you, I must have seen before As many times I hear And yet I yearn, for more But why not see as me? Circumvent, with passion lost Take off the mask, the fret See as I, you must have seen before When you did yearn for more You’re thumping heart, the bliss Dissipate, just like the morning mist!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/28/2011 7:51:00 AM
Hi David! Sounds of entreatment. Great metaphoric assembly whispered upon "The winter's melody". You are a poetical darling! Wishing you the best!! Mikki
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Date: 2/2/2011 7:27:00 AM
When the passion is gone, we do feel like we have "gone to ground." I sometimes envy those whose hearts are thumping with bliss. Nicely done, David, and it's great to see you posting again. Was wondering where you'd been and hoping you were okay. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/2/2011 5:14:00 AM
Lost luv is never easy David my friend but rather an experience of life to learn from .. again not always easy lesson luv... amazing words to your poetry ... take off the mask, the fret .. intimate .. dissipate .. like the morning mist... letting it go ... for real... so happy to hear from u on site... please continue to keep in touch luv and fill me in .. please ..with luv..
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Date: 2/1/2011 11:50:00 PM
Yes, it's mysterious as Nette says. But I think I get it. I hope I got it! But I won't make a fool of myself and tell you what I am thinking.(in case I am wrong) haha. Anyway, I really liked the last part with the dissipating mist and thumping heart. Great imagery. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/1/2011 11:41:00 PM
hmmm... mysteriously inviting, david.. i like the hidden meaning here! :) nette
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