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Sedoka Contest There's a Rainbow of Love

Natural rainbow Sunlight's spectrum of color Diverted water droplets Circle rainbow aglow God's love exposed this wonder Mankind reaps beauty's assets There's a rainbow true When gray darkens the blue sky Light shines through the massive clouds Promises anew God's presence will amplify Doubt's hold lifted love unshroud
Inspired by Laura Loo's Contest Written: January 06, 2016
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January 28, 2016 at 9:09 PM
Sara, Congrats on your interesting win. Love LINDA -
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January 20, 2016 at 4:44 PM
Hi Sara, congratulations on your nice win in Laura's contest! Love your uplifting words and imagery. Hugs, Sandra
Cwiak Avatar
January 20, 2016 at 4:14 PM
Poignant and so true, Sara. Kudos on your win.
Dietrich Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 3:54 PM
Awesome win, Sara. Congratulations.
Kimathi Avatar
January 19, 2016 at 6:50 AM
I felt as though I was staring at Heaven in a crystal ball, as I looked at the picture.... Really divine and serene piece. Congrats Sara, on your top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
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January 18, 2016 at 10:35 AM
SARA, Congrats on your "SEDOKA FORM (Rhymed) winning poem." love SKAT**
Scars Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 10:06 AM
Sara, I loved your poem. The imagery was perfect! Thank you for being a part of my contest! *smiles* -luloo
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January 11, 2016 at 11:56 AM
Beautiful pen Sara! Nicely written Sedoka poem.A 7!GL in the contest!I wish you and your family a Very Happy and Prosperous New Year 2016!Wishing you a very lovely week!in his light God bless you!:)D.
Fisher Avatar
January 10, 2016 at 11:43 AM
Enjoyed your poetic painting of the picture.
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January 9, 2016 at 12:11 PM
Sara, glad I was able to stop by and read this wonderful write. Best to you in the contest. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl
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January 7, 2016 at 3:35 PM
Sara, my dog was a miniature Eskimo dog!! Did you guess that? I missed him so much. He was the one I had to give away because of his bad potty habits. He lived a few years with someone from PetSmart, I was told. I hope they were telling me the truth!!
Kendrick Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 5:22 PM
I hope that your pet got a good home and that he lived a long life..I have soup mailed you some more details..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Horsman Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 3:12 PM
you write the words Sara, the poem portrays the scene which is beautiful
Kendrick Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 5:22 PM
Thanks for the kind review of my work..I hope that everyone feels the fact that God shows us one of His covenants everytime there is a rainbow..Sara
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January 7, 2016 at 11:08 AM
sara, this melody glows with much joy and pleasant anticipation of peace... ohh so fine; i love rainbows!.. huggs
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January 7, 2016 at 4:21 AM
I tasted the colors of your poems.They are wonderful.Congrat.Your verses: ”Promises anew”.Best regards.
Kendrick Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 5:28 PM
Thanks for the encouraging review of my work..Sara
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January 6, 2016 at 11:03 PM
Oh My, I love the picture. Sara, wishing you the best of luck in the contest. Love LINDA
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January 7, 2016 at 5:28 PM
PD, Yes, I am sure I will need all the well wishes that I can get..LOL.. Sara
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January 6, 2016 at 7:50 PM
very nice, and that is an awesome picture going with it.
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January 7, 2016 at 5:27 PM
Andrea, When I saw that picture I just knew that I needed to write a poem to go along with it..Thanks for the visit..Sara
Sage Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 4:17 PM
beautiful pic and a fascinating write, excellent Sara
Kendrick Avatar
January 7, 2016 at 5:26 PM
WS, Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate you taking time to read and comment..Sara
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January 6, 2016 at 2:50 PM
- Is there a song called, "You promised me a rainbow" too (?) ..... This is beautiful, Sara - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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January 7, 2016 at 5:24 PM
Seems like I remember that song..Thanks for the kind review..Sara
Kendrick Avatar
January 6, 2016 at 2:27 PM
There is a song called "There's A Rainbow Of Love" one group that sang it is called the Catherals which can be heard on YouTube when you type in the title of the song and on YouTube. The song and the picture influenced the writing of this work..Sara
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