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Secular story, spiritual solution

Beige brokenness Invisible Trim athletic midwestern news anchor Flys down south She needs the heat of the sun Georgia Altanta Yeah that's where she'll land Where she'll go She lives her life She's got her plan She is blind to the peace she can not understand On the outside others think she has it all and she'd probably agree. Various forms of darkness Persists Fundamential Or Financial Do you comprehend?

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Date: 11/2/2008 5:43:00 PM
The plan of action in this poem seems feasible to undertake. It's always a pleasure to think about tomorrow. This poem displays action and promises for tomorrow. I like the flow of the words and the message. Great job! ~Joseph
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