Secrets

Secrets are grey They taste like lemons They smell like rotten eggs They look like monsters They make you feel like a liar ashleybradford

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Vee Bdosa

Date: 2/25/2012 8:26:00 AM

ha ha Ashley let me tell you now, that I love lemons I just ate one for breakfast, I just cut it in half, and spoon the pulp out like one does grapefruit and eat the whole thing. Now about your poem, it is very effective in telling the world a truth that is ignored, you know Bradley Manning I think that is his name, he sent WikiLeaks a ton of secrets that embarassed a lot of important people. He is in trouble now. But you are right, secrets smell like rotton eggs. Good work in just a few words.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/25/2012 7:26:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Ashley. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol