Secrets

In the forest
Grows a tree
And underneath
Their secrets be
Deep below its
Roots extend
Down passageways
That curl and bend
Secrets told to 
Branch above
Nestle down there
Like a glove
They wait there
Patient for the
Day they can
Emerge and
Have their say
Tell your troubles
To that tree
So you can set
Your warm heart
Free.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Marcum Wong Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 10:31 AM
I wouldn't want to live in a world without trees David and I have shared my thoughts and dreams with my favorite trees and strange trees who also extend their welcome arms. Beautiful write! Aloha, Connie
Trevino Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 12:01 PM
awhh, cute write, I usually talk to my little brother but it's the same as talking to a tree cause he doesn't listen to a single word but that's why I tell him cause he won't say a word lol i just tell him to get release lol , enjoyed, =(^.^)=Royal
A  Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 8:13 PM
SeCrEtS aRE mEaNt to be LEt Out LoL!! *LUV- S.K.A.T.
Bloomsfield Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 4:57 PM
Hey Dave,I usually tell my secrets to my pillow. .Do you have an extra tree for me pls?Maybe an old oak tree. .those are my favourite in poems..We all have our secrets. .enjoyed!Celene.
Chachere Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 4:55 PM
to tel your secrets to the trees in the forest. interesting, and something to ponder on. ~Always&Forever Lynette
Devonshire Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 3:28 PM
What a thought-provoking poem, David! Brilliant! I'll be looking for a tree that listens... Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
August 13, 2010 at 10:15 AM
Another day of reading the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I enjoyed reading yours today David. Have a wonderful weekend. I need to see if I can find some inspiration this weekend. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
August 12, 2010 at 6:46 PM
A wonderful expression of nature and emotion David.. quite impressive write..my friend.. look for my new blog and poem tomorrow as my bye for now as I leave for my trip and big day..with luv..
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August 12, 2010 at 6:45 PM
:) I love it, David! Goes to my favorite. Very inspiring!
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