Secrets

Secrets.
Coming forth from the water.
Tiny feet tinkling as they come.
Quiet,
Can you hear them?
Silver streaks of light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Lakhera Avatar
December 2, 2008 at 11:49 PM
This almost blew me in wonder. I can possibly interpret it in my own way. And I loved it. Welcome to the soup. Love, Chitra
Swanson Avatar
December 2, 2008 at 10:14 AM
Very pretty and also mysterious! Hauntingly beautiful, wonderful writing. God bless, Amy :)
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