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Secret of Rhyming

A rhyming scheme defines my style Where magic drips on quill’s potion, If quintains and sonnets beguile Hands pray for meter’s salvation, This secret I keep, to win the throne! Juli-Michelle's Rhyme Battle: Round Five

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/20/2014 10:09:00 AM

Nette, - Congratulations... Nice rhyming poem.... Happy Easter.... Love-Linda

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/19/2014 10:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Nette. Love and blessings for a happy Easter weekend, Carolyn

Monterey Sirak

Date: 4/19/2014 6:39:00 AM

And once again a winner! Your words draw the reader in like a siren's call.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/19/2014 3:47:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS NETTE.. ;) no wonder you always on winner's list.. :D

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/19/2014 1:31:00 AM

And u r on the throne Nette,,, Congrats on beautiful winning poetry !

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 4/18/2014 7:35:00 PM

Nice win Nette... Congratulations... Verlena

Tim Smith

Date: 4/18/2014 5:45:00 PM

Stopping by again to congratulate on your win.....Hugs Tim

Paul Callus

Date: 4/18/2014 3:38:00 PM

And now the secret's out!!! Congratulations :) // paul

Aiyah Torres

Date: 4/18/2014 3:34:00 PM

Yes ,She's a queen!! :O)) Congratulations Nette!!! ...

Painted Hunter

Date: 4/15/2014 10:31:00 AM

Your poems beguile...that's for sure. How have ya been, Nette?

Norma Arana

Date: 4/14/2014 11:19:00 PM

This witty, unique rhyme makes me go "wooof" & that is a good thing! I like the way you think.

Jeremy Street

Date: 4/14/2014 7:09:00 PM

With Your Word Wizards Want Waste Not While Waiting In Her Wings Where Whimsical Warlocks Wrangle With Their Creams A Stitch Through Time His Perfect Rhyme Seems Nothing While He Thinks Of She This Beauty Queen And Her Ruby Jeans Concubines From Another Line Birthed Amore Aneath A Golden Shore As She Stole His Heart But That's The Part In Her Beauty's Art ... The Throne Be Hers The Bone Is His Get On Back All You Funky Kids With Your Slang Bang Punky Thang She's The Queen Your Poetic Scene Bumble Bee's In Their Spinning Dreams .... Love, Jeremy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2014 6:46:00 PM

awesome entry, Nette. You just might win the throne!

Tim Smith

Date: 4/14/2014 6:44:00 PM

Very well done nette. Love the rhyming...hugs Tim