Rama Balasubramanian Poet Verse

Secret of Joy and Peace

Be good
Do good
What you give will come back
So give what you want like
Helping others
Smiling often
Talking nicely

Criticize never
Praise forever
One negative thought can ruin individual
One positive comment can build future
Increase confidence
Impel Improvement
Actuate progression

Keep mind
On labour
Mind should be absorbed in work
Mind concentrated at work in hand
Increases speed
Improves quality
Bestows nirvana

Date: 1/11/2021

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Eve Roper January 20, 2021 at 3:39 AM Rama, nicely done. Congratulations on your third place win. Hugs Eve Rama Balasubramanian January 20, 2021 at 7:27 AM Thanks and same to you too. Enjoy your day friend. Do take care, Rama

Joseph May January 19, 2021 at 6:51 AM Very nicely penned Rama, Congrats on your win.. Rama Balasubramanian January 19, 2021 at 7:03 AM Thanks for the contest and my placement. Thanks for teaching a new poetic form. Your brevette form made me a premier contest winner. God bless you. Take care Rama

Gershon Wolf January 12, 2021 at 5:20 PM I like the way you formatted this poem, Rama, and I love 'Criticize never // Praise forever!' That's the ticket! Light and Love, Gershon Rama Balasubramanian January 13, 2021 at 3:39 AM Written for contest. Trinet form. You should participate. You will enjoy. Have a wonderful day ahead Gershon. Take care, Rama