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Secret of Joy and Peace

Be good Do good What you give will come back So give what you want like Helping others Smiling often Talking nicely Criticize never Praise forever One negative thought can ruin individual One positive comment can build future Increase confidence Impel Improvement Actuate progression Keep mind On labour Mind should be absorbed in work Mind concentrated at work in hand Increases speed Improves quality Bestows nirvana Date: 1/11/2021

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Date: 1/20/2021 3:39:00 AM
Rama, nicely done. Congratulations on your third place win. Hugs Eve
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 1/20/2021 7:27:00 AM
Thanks and same to you too. Enjoy your day friend. Do take care, Rama
Date: 1/19/2021 6:51:00 AM
Very nicely penned Rama, Congrats on your win..
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 1/19/2021 7:03:00 AM
Thanks for the contest and my placement. Thanks for teaching a new poetic form. Your brevette form made me a premier contest winner. God bless you. Take care Rama
Date: 1/12/2021 5:20:00 PM
I like the way you formatted this poem, Rama, and I love 'Criticize never // Praise forever!' That's the ticket! Light and Love, Gershon
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Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 1/13/2021 3:39:00 AM
Written for contest. Trinet form. You should participate. You will enjoy. Have a wonderful day ahead Gershon. Take care, Rama

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