Deborah Jones Poet Ballad

Secret Love

I keep my love for you a secret sheltered from all that I fear 
I am sworn to secrecy like an anonymous message left in a bottle bound for some distant shore 
I search depp within the recesses of my heart and mind
To find the answer that that I desperately long for 
I tell myself that am loved to holding on steadfast loving you to the core 
But for now I will keep my love for you a secret 
A hidden agenda that nobody knows holding it sacred like some age old prophecy
I keep my love for you a secret promising to never divulge the depth of my love for you
I keep my love for you a secret clan destined only by the veil of time
Secretly I wave a banner in the air as I proclaim to be the victor of this secret love affair
Eagerly anticipating the day when kismet comes to call 
But for now I will keep my love for you a secret

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Skat A July 9, 2016 at 1:41 AM NICE TO SEE THIS ONE AGAIN, DEBORAH..SKAT

Vicky Tsiluma January 11, 2014 at 10:46 PM Hi Deborah, I would like to extend my hand in welcome to the PoetrySoup community. I love your poem - secret love, now that's got to be tough! Well written! There’s a lot to learn from each other here and hopefully you will have a great time while at it. Feel free to drop me a line when you can. I am looking forward to reading more from you. Vicky. Deborah Jones January 13, 2014 at 7:29 AM Thank You Vicky I love your poems entitled Nobody Lives here and I shall call you by your first name Wow well written

Skat A December 26, 2013 at 12:09 AM Hi Deborah, , Hope you are enjoying the holidays, -- Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"

Donna Jones December 14, 2013 at 5:42 PM Beautiful poem..I really loved your opening line..sheltered from all that I fear...welcome to soup..:-)

Poet Tacito December 13, 2013 at 2:31 PM "When kismet comes to call"...spot on! Such a painful, but sometimes necessary love that truly tests our character. Excellent job, Deborah! Nice to meet you!

Anne-Lise Andresen December 13, 2013 at 11:46 AM - Welcome to P-Soup, Deborah ! - Nice to read your first poem here.:)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A December 13, 2013 at 11:23 AM Deborah, I like the secret love theme. . ,A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@