Secret Garden

This is my secret garden. 
Where feelings ripen and harden. 
Perpetual light shined on this plain.
Now the light is starting to wane. 

The beauty that lives inside, 
is all but lost to the outside. 
It tried to bloom and show you its splendor. 
You didn't want it, so it had to surrender. 

It went down without a fight. 
Now it sees only the blackness of night. 
The garden wanted nothing but to please. 
The owner of it, must watch it freeze. 

All his intentions and dreams,
were ripped apart at the seams. 
Now everything he is will be lost. 
No one cared, so he paid the final cost.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Righting Riley - Shauna Riley Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 8:07 PM
very well written and love the way this is described as a secret garden....so many can relate...well done!
Maverick Avatar
February 15, 2011 at 5:41 PM
Dear Chris, very pertinent words tonite my friend, these sentiments will no doubt help sustain me and many others as well.
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