Secret

Its was fun alright 
being your secret
you told everyone 
and had to ruin it
its not my fault 
everyone knows who you are
 
is it day or night
do you perseve?
Or am I alone in the clouds
wait for you to breathe
its just a start
do you question me I dare

they all say she is pretty enough
does you self esteem fall
I m dancing on my own graves 
im waiting for you to call
do you miss me
what its like to be alone afterall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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August 22, 2016 at 2:31 PM
A very powerful little poem; surely borne from personal experience I would assume. Nevertheless, whatever the inspiration...It is very cleverly done - Excellent!! My best regards, Eddywon. :) john P.s An obvious and much deserved seven!
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