Seconds

Seconds form every day swiftly or slowly pass as a droplet of water drips in time
Traditional Cinquain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Devnath  Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 12:05 PM
It's nice and cute. Superb imagination.Loved always, bl
Trifiatis Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 7:25 AM
Droplets of wisdom accumulated by time! Superb!
Sivey Avatar
May 25, 2013 at 6:57 AM
This is a wonderful and inspirational write, truly it is a very inspirational poem Sara...I just love the connection between drips of water and time passing, each second as the water drips! There is a Cure song (a group from the 70's and 80's) that has something to do with water dripping and time elapsing! Very clever way to express time moving on by my friend! I really loved reading this piece this poem this morning, Great Work!!
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