Jay Loveless Poet I do not know?

Second of December

look within my soul, past the rotting doors within my eyes,
rooted deep within my core, you speak and i hurt, i hide,
as thunder breaks the sky,
streaking to target my heart, crumbeling on the inside
i hear my pain like echos of a rumbeling train,
shuddering like mirages in the heat, it takes all the power i have 
to call above and see that i am me, to tell all that i want to be free
and i dont i wont be decieved 
please dont let me be decieved by his eyes
i no longer want to believe his lies
and live in regret and in dishonesty
life is changing me 
and i can barely breath
as i am embers 
just dieing embers 
by the second of december

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Audrey Haick March 25, 2010 at 2:12 PM My Rain....this is sooooo good!!! This tells me that you are strong...I know sometimes even with our strength, we hurt so much we want to give up...but you've got too much to give, I can tell..just imagine how your life story will help mold your children in the future!! Please, please, please keep writing and sharing... my Jimmy told me to read this..we both think that you have great talent..When r u going to post, "When It Rains"? ...xoxo..Peace, love, audrey

Colleen Bono November 18, 2009 at 8:40 AM Very nicely written.Thanx for the comments on my poems.I just wrote a new poem,Under The Moonlit Sky.Check it out.

Cesar Cantu November 16, 2009 at 1:33 PM Oh, strong strong phonetical expressions @.@ special numbers in time? thanks for sharing =D

Jay Loveless November 16, 2009 at 11:08 AM Thanks So Much Guys =) xo Love Always Your Raiinbow

John Freeman November 13, 2009 at 7:15 PM Being deceived does suck, but like Sara, I say blow on thoes dying embers, ignite a new flame, throw a new log on the fire. Sincerely, Love, Moses

Logan Saucillo November 13, 2009 at 1:05 PM i like this. being deceived sucks. it'd be interesting to work with you on something, like to collaborate our ideas together. that'd be fun =)

Sara Kendrick November 13, 2009 at 12:24 PM Give those embers a spark and come to life. Need the words to flow. Thanks for the comments on all my work. Sara