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Second Haiku Attempt

Pond glistening like silver bowl The Moon shows off its soothing glow Clouds try to play a spoil sport

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Date: 9/2/2024 7:01:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 7/16/2016 4:18:00 AM
A beautiful poem ... Enjoyed it ...
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Vivek Malhotra
Date: 7/16/2016 5:06:00 AM
thanks

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