Seasons To Wonder

All the evergreens are greener
And the pines are darker skinned
Only leaves that bear the burn marks 
Are the witnesses of wind.

On the grass the dew is frozen
In a spiders web of white
And the cold that bites my fingers
Makes me wonder as I write.

How did winter come so swiftly
How did summer die so fast
Where’s the grave, where was the battle
Are they all buried in the past?

Now I feel the winter nibble 
On my fingers with its frost
And the wind that it has summoned
Mourns for seasons that are lost.

Was it but one dusk, one daybreak
Was it only in a blink?
For the summer was my feather
Now the winter is my ink.

How did shadows shift so quickly
How did colours change so much
As reflections in the water
That simply vanish with a touch?

Now the daffodils are rising
Yet the jasmine blooms are gone
Now the evergreens are greener
And the frost adorns the dawn.

Yes, how strange it is to wonder
So I wonder as I write
What if winter should then also
Simply vanish in the night?

I dedicate this poem (and I'm not being sarcastic or exaggerating)
to my mentor and my friend Timothy Brumley, who taught me 
the art of rhythm, showed me the advantage of counting my syllables, 
raised my goal from acceptable to perfection,
and helped me to turn my nursery rhymes into poetry. 
(and no Tim don’t protest, they really were nursery rhymes)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Clark Avatar
April 5, 2015 at 11:43 AM
wow thats a good poem thank you for sharing it yes season do come and go so fast as i write we are just coming into the glourious sunshine of spring and flowers are begining to bloom
Green Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 11:10 AM
Enjoyed the read as I too watch the seasons go, think about the seasons of our lives, and oft wonder what will be when our own winter's past. My I have your permission to use your poem in my entry in "The Heart of the Matter" contest. Would welcome your comments on my "Through My Window."
Delaney Avatar
April 24, 2013 at 10:51 AM
A beautiful poem to start my day. Nature keeps us ever dreaming. Wind to your wings. SuZ
A   Avatar
October 18, 2012 at 8:54 PM
Rauwolfia:-) congratulations with your wonderful win in the " February, 2012 Contest " It is very nice to see you on this winning list..*'.*'.*' hip hip hooray. Good night :-) always~ PD
Goudreau Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 4:03 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win. This poem is a winner and beautifully written. The imagery and the rhymes are awesome. You have so much talent. Such a pleasure reading you here! Hugs..
Rutherford Avatar
August 22, 2012 at 6:43 AM
Wow this is a winner Rauwolfia ,The reader can look at this and take a lot of ways to interpret your intent ,there is a deeper message in it than just winter . Very well done Hugs Anne
Brumley Avatar
August 15, 2012 at 11:00 AM
Congratulations Little Sister! I told you that this one was a winner:) Just a chip off the old block I'd say. You told me that if you ever won then you would do something for me, remember?
Amadore Avatar
August 7, 2012 at 5:47 PM
I admire, appreciate, and certainly enjoy your well-crafted and masterfully evocative poem. Thank you for creating it and for posting it here.
A   Avatar
August 6, 2012 at 9:33 PM
RV, Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Take care. *Luv* PD
Brown Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 8:03 PM
Congratulations on your win in the PoetrySoup International Contest Rauwolfia. Love, Carol
Kendrick Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 6:39 PM
((()))Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Guzzi Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 6:17 PM
So nice to read your work, lovely use of meter. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Dietrich Avatar
July 30, 2012 at 3:45 PM
oh my, I remember this one and how much I loved it from before. This one is amazingly good. BIG congrats to you and this goes into my FAVES
Babcock Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 5:38 PM
Congrats on your international win. love phyl
Williams Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 1:04 PM
Rauwolfia congratulations on your International win...David
Dietrich Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 9:42 PM
oh my gosh, I just saw comments below mine and I see this one made it into the final round. WEll, good for YOU. Hope it goes higher!! mine that made it into the finals is also on the season going into winter: September!
Dietrich Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 9:41 PM
WOW, this is GREAT poetry. I too love to liken the seasons to our lives. it's a great poetic device which you have done marvelously with in this poem. So glad to see you here and read this poem. Probably the best I have seen tonight!
Brown Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 8:58 AM
Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Rauwolfia. Love, Carol
Seawolf Avatar
December 11, 2011 at 1:45 PM
Yet I have a fine feeling of the history of your continent. As result of reading every novel ever written by Wilbur Smith. Came within a SeaCat's hair-breadth of sailing crost my seas to CapeTown. Coulda shouldas thus have me a'wish I'd would've. Within some of my rimes you may see reference to Africa-it's mystery and legends...the Narina Trogan is one.... and I think Madagascar something title is yet another. I'll be reading more of your works... and wish you a fine holiday season. SeaWolf
Seawolf Avatar
December 11, 2011 at 1:37 PM
Very first... this of yours... I now so have read ~ A dance of word-ly clarity... Oft somewhat a rarity... Nicely 'twas it done... Thus so a read of fun. Have never been a'foot your lands... Nor your golden sands have sifted... Once did know by pen... A gal from CapeTown then... 'Til to Madagascar her pirogue she drifted. Left she did my spirits lifted. SeaWolf
Squyres Avatar
December 4, 2011 at 5:38 PM
Can re-read this again and again.. Love it !!
Sanders Avatar
November 4, 2011 at 9:43 AM
YOU INSPIRER ME. YOU ARE ABSOLUTELY A GREAT POET. I'VE NEVER SAID THAT TO ANOTHER POET OTHER THEN IAN SAWICKI.
Rutherford Avatar
September 24, 2011 at 6:05 PM
Rauwolfia, this is amazing, well crafted and the rhyme is impressive. A beautful poem. Thank you for caring words. Anne
Davies Avatar
September 19, 2011 at 10:00 AM
As a metaphor to life (and death) this is a brilliant piece of work.......Ivor
Brumley Avatar
August 6, 2011 at 2:04 PM
Absolutely brilliant with powerful imagery! This is one of your best writes yet little sister.
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