Joanna Daniel Poet Rhyme

Season's Reasons

Spring renews earth and all it holds
More green unfolds
Young ones at play
Life sings like jay

Summer spreads warm sunshine and heat
More lazy feet
Walks in the sand
Life gets sun-tanned

Winter brings frozen snow and ice
More of white spice
Nipping wind blows
Life simply slows


07.20.2021



For Joseph May's "12 lines in Rhyme" contest

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Aniruddha Pathak July 29, 2021 at 5:36 AM Well said, seasons have their reasons, yet alas, man wants it cool when it is warm; and warm, when cozy and cool. A good backgrounder to the poem, educative, congrats for the win

Kim Rodrigues July 28, 2021 at 5:18 AM Jo, thank you for the captivating narrative before your poem. Wow! I was visiting in Minnesota and I woke up to the light at 5:30. Didn’t realize it was lighter even in Minnesota during the Summer. Love the Winter, however I need the changing of seasons. Congratulations!

Sam Kauffman July 27, 2021 at 9:43 AM Wonderful observations Jo! I especially like the line about life getting a suntan! Congratulations on your win. Very creative! Wonderful images.

Anisha Dutta July 26, 2021 at 11:22 AM Congrats to win on your wonderful poem. I admire.

Christuraj Alex July 26, 2021 at 10:01 AM Beautiful depiction of seasons. You have always new ideas. Congratulations on your win.

Alexis Y. July 26, 2021 at 10:00 AM WoW! Jo, You captured the seasons well in this in particular form. Well done. Congratulations on your 1st and place win. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Janice Canerdy July 26, 2021 at 9:36 AM A big CONGRATS on your win, Jo. Janice

Paula Goldsmith July 26, 2021 at 9:11 AM Congratulations on your win. A creative "Season's Reasons" write. Thanks for adding the top part. Have a blessed day............

Joseph May July 26, 2021 at 6:03 AM Very nicely penned Jo, Congrats on your win

John Watt July 21, 2021 at 4:08 PM Jo, you have captured the essence of these seasons with your poetry. Our Creator has blessed us with the seasons and the delightful variety they bring. Well done on a challenging format ~ John

Rama Balasubramanian July 20, 2021 at 11:36 AM Wonderful take on contest with difficult syllable count. Reads like a winner to me. All the best!

Vijay Pandit July 20, 2021 at 5:37 AM Beautiful reasons for seasons--really well done. No doubt a win for you.

Tom Cunningham July 20, 2021 at 4:53 AM Lovely trip through the seasons Jo, lets hope it keeps on the same axis Hope your week is going well Tom

Victor Buhagiar July 20, 2021 at 3:40 AM I know Joseph's contest is not so easy, but you gave a great poem to show you can do it. Blessings.