Sunita U.D Palawon Poet Rhyme

Seasons of Love

In the obscure, a search
Adventure and venture
Changing panoramas lure

In nowhere, the everywhere
In strange, the familiar
In distant, the close
In sour, the sweet
Throbbing pain, a thirst
In union, peace.

Everywhere, the nowhere
In familiar, the stranger
In close, the distance
In sweet, bitterness
Thirst in poignant pain
Restlessness, in separation

Changing panoramas lure
In the obscure to search
Adventure and venture
Once more……

5/08/17

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Funom Makama June 30, 2017 at 8:51 AM This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share. Sunita U.D Palawon June 30, 2017 at 10:51 AM Oh Funom thanks...I'm blushing :D touched by this heartfelt praise. I'm so blessed to have you go through this writing and have your valuable comment. Good luck with your wonderful poems. :)

Darren White June 18, 2017 at 8:15 AM Really wonderful how the first and last stanza mirror. How, in fact, everything mirrors. That is an amazing accomplishment! Sunita U.D Palawon June 18, 2017 at 8:24 AM Hi thanks Darren for the visit and the very constructive comment. Really appreciate. :)

Joanna Daniel June 18, 2017 at 8:08 AM Amazing write, Sunita, nice, rhythmic and refreshing:) Sunita U.D Palawon June 18, 2017 at 8:32 AM So glad you liked it and thanks much for going through. Your comment is inspiring. :)

Maria Williams June 18, 2017 at 2:49 AM Fascinating theory of Seasons Sunita. I really enjoyed it... Maria Sunita U.D Palawon June 18, 2017 at 7:15 AM I'm glad you appreciate Maria. Thanks :))

Ravi Sathasivam June 16, 2017 at 10:33 AM Excellent and well descriptive write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Sunita U.D Palawon June 16, 2017 at 10:59 AM Thanks Ravi for going through...Seen your work. You writing so deep. G.Luck for all. :)

Daniel Turner June 15, 2017 at 5:54 PM Fascinating write, Sunita. I love the originality, too:) Sunita U.D Palawon June 16, 2017 at 10:54 AM Hi Daniel. Glad to hear form. Thanks for the visit and nice comment. Been so ill. Missed you all a lot lot! :)

Faraz Ajmal June 15, 2017 at 3:47 PM A very beautiful written poem, I really like it for its depth how beautifully you ve described it, I really enjoyed your new poem, continue to write Sunita U.D Palawon June 16, 2017 at 10:53 AM Hi Faraz, thanks so much to go through it and the nice comment. G.Luck with your writing. :)