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Seasons of Love

In the obscure, a search Adventure and venture Changing panoramas lure In nowhere, the everywhere In strange, the familiar In distant, the close In sour, the sweet Throbbing pain, a thirst In union, peace. Everywhere, the nowhere In familiar, the stranger In close, the distance In sweet, bitterness Thirst in poignant pain Restlessness, in separation Changing panoramas lure In the obscure to search Adventure and venture Once more…… 5/08/17

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Funom Makama

Date: 6/30/2017 8:51:00 AM

This is fantastic, so fantastic. Coming to this page feels predestined because I feel so satisfied. Thanks for the wonderful share.

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/30/2017 10:51:00 AM

Oh Funom thanks...I'm blushing :D touched by this heartfelt praise. I'm so blessed to have you go through this writing and have your valuable comment. Good luck with your wonderful poems. :)

Darren White

Date: 6/18/2017 8:15:00 AM

Really wonderful how the first and last stanza mirror. How, in fact, everything mirrors. That is an amazing accomplishment!

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/18/2017 8:24:00 AM

Hi thanks Darren for the visit and the very constructive comment. Really appreciate. :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/18/2017 8:08:00 AM

Amazing write, Sunita, nice, rhythmic and refreshing:)

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/18/2017 8:32:00 AM

So glad you liked it and thanks much for going through. Your comment is inspiring. :)

Maria Williams

Date: 6/18/2017 2:49:00 AM

Fascinating theory of Seasons Sunita. I really enjoyed it... Maria

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/18/2017 7:15:00 AM

I'm glad you appreciate Maria. Thanks :))

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/16/2017 10:33:00 AM

Excellent and well descriptive write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/16/2017 10:59:00 AM

Thanks Ravi for going through...Seen your work. You writing so deep. G.Luck for all. :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/15/2017 5:54:00 PM

Fascinating write, Sunita. I love the originality, too:)

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/16/2017 10:54:00 AM

Hi Daniel. Glad to hear form. Thanks for the visit and nice comment. Been so ill. Missed you all a lot lot! :)

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/15/2017 3:47:00 PM

A very beautiful written poem, I really like it for its depth how beautifully you ve described it, I really enjoyed your new poem, continue to write

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/16/2017 10:53:00 AM

Hi Faraz, thanks so much to go through it and the nice comment. G.Luck with your writing. :)

Niall Fulham

Date: 6/15/2017 11:58:00 AM

Hi Sunita , Beautiful descriptive write ,, I have a poem called ' love ' you might like :))))hugs from Ireland :)))

Sunita U.D Palawon
Date: 6/15/2017 12:06:00 PM

Thanks niall to be here with such nice comments. really appreciate. :))