Deborah Burch Poet Rhyme

Seasons Lost

Spring has gone and Summer ended
Autumn leaves did fall
Winter's pale horizon's blended
Misty in its pawl
Grass once green its hues resended
Nowinshriveledmass
Faint beneath the frost   offended
By its                    fleeting pass.

~deborah burch©2006



*Note: 6th line is for effect (Now in shriveled mass)

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Terry L. Allen May 14, 2012 at 11:07 PM Sweet and simple. Nice write. Huggs Talee Deborah Burch May 14, 2012 at 11:43 PM thanksTLee!! hope all is well with you...big hugs, love ya , deb :)

Andrea Dietrich March 19, 2012 at 10:56 PM I love the flow of this one. Nice and metrical! cute lines on the seasons as well. Deborah Burch March 20, 2012 at 12:51 AM Thank you Andrea dear :)-Big Hug~deb

Anne-Lise Andresen March 12, 2012 at 3:55 AM Lovely poem about all seasons Deb. - oxox love Anne-Lise Deborah Burch March 12, 2012 at 5:01 AM Thank you so much Anne-Lise!! Your kindness and encouragement is sooo gracious...I look forward to getting to know you and the rest of 'Soup'...huggggssss...