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Seasons Lost

Spring has gone and Summer ended Autumn leaves did fall Winter's pale horizon's blended Misty in its pawl Grass once green its hues resended Nowinshriveledmass Faint beneath the frost offended By its fleeting pass. ~deborah burch©2006 *Note: 6th line is for effect (Now in shriveled mass)

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Terry L. Allen

Date: 5/14/2012 11:07:00 PM

Sweet and simple. Nice write. Huggs Talee

Deborah Burch
Date: 5/14/2012 11:43:00 PM

thanksTLee!! hope all is well with you...big hugs, love ya , deb :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2012 10:56:00 PM

I love the flow of this one. Nice and metrical! cute lines on the seasons as well.

Deborah Burch
Date: 3/20/2012 12:51:00 AM

Thank you Andrea dear :)-Big Hug~deb

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/12/2012 3:55:00 AM

Lovely poem about all seasons Deb. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Deborah Burch
Date: 3/12/2012 5:01:00 AM

Thank you so much Anne-Lise!! Your kindness and encouragement is sooo gracious...I look forward to getting to know you and the rest of 'Soup'...huggggssss...