Jan Allison Poet Haiku

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Seasons Haiku - Collaboration With Shane Cooper

Spring

Cool breeze gently blows
Brilliant butterflies dancing
Rainbows in motion
 
Summer
 
Glorious gold beach
Sandcastles reach for the sky
Children having fun 
  
Autumn
 
Crisp leaves fall slowly
Green glens veiled in falls blanket
Sunset beneath trees
 
Winter
 
Cold icy morning
Dancing whirling wonderland
Snowflakes from heaven

Collaboration with Shane Cooper
15th January 2015

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Vassilis Comporozos January 17, 2015 at 2:39 PM I really liked the winter one! Jan Allison January 17, 2015 at 2:40 PM Thanks so much Vassilis - it is Shane's first collaboration I think he did really well:-) Hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus January 16, 2015 at 4:45 PM What a lovely string of haiku you two have put on offering! Ms Year must be very proud of you!! Well done...Jan & Shane. // paul Jan Allison January 16, 2015 at 6:17 PM Thanks so much for your lovely comment Paul:-) hugs Jan xxx

Demetrios Trifiatis January 16, 2015 at 4:07 AM Vivaldi would be so Jealous of you two! Your four seasons are a marvel of Haiku! A seven to each, dear, Jan and Shane, Shane and Jan! Jan Allison January 16, 2015 at 7:03 AM Thanks so much for the lovely comment Demetrios - this is Shane's first collaboration and i think he did brilliantly:-) Hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich January 15, 2015 at 10:25 PM Jan, it was so sweet of you to do a collaboration with Shane, and I love the picture you put up with this set. I had seen these at Shane's page and wondered how you divided up the writing between you. Let me know!! I never collaborated haiku before with anyone. And these are so pretty. Jan Allison January 16, 2015 at 2:30 AM Will never tell LOL that is the beauty of a good collaboration - with Darren we would never admit who wrote the naughty stuff and as you know I am a complete angel and always well behaved ... lol :-) love and hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A January 15, 2015 at 10:09 PM This is the first Jan, a collaborating haiku... I love it...PD Jan Allison January 16, 2015 at 2:28 AM Think we did really well between us Linda:-) hugs jan x

Maurice Yvonne January 15, 2015 at 6:19 PM All four haikus are marvelous! Jan Allison January 15, 2015 at 6:21 PM Thanks so much my lovely friend:-) love and hugs as ever jan x

Richard Lamoureux January 15, 2015 at 6:05 PM You and Shane did a wonderful job Jan. Summer is my favorite! Jan Allison January 15, 2015 at 6:06 PM I love all the seasons Richard each one brings its own unique features:-) hugs Jan xx

Shadow Hamilton January 15, 2015 at 4:53 PM each season perfectly painted Jan and Shane true haiku beautifully penned hugs Jan Allison January 15, 2015 at 4:55 PM Thanks so much for the lovely comment Shadow:-) Hugs jan xx

Shane Cooper January 15, 2015 at 3:56 PM Jan, I just want to thank you again for collaborating with me on these season poems. i really enjoyed working with you it was fun. love Shane xxx Jan Allison January 15, 2015 at 4:55 PM ** blushes** you are too kind:-) Hugs jan xx Shane Cooper January 15, 2015 at 4:09 PM Double the fun. Fun writing and fun working with you. love Shane xxx Jan Allison January 15, 2015 at 4:00 PM I think they worked out really well Shane:-) Glad you had fun:-) hugs Jan x

Kayod5 Kayode January 15, 2015 at 3:31 PM This is lovely Jan, thank goodness my season is glorious gold...huggs Jan Allison January 15, 2015 at 3:32 PM Thanks so much for dropping by Kayod5:-) Hugs jan xxx

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders January 15, 2015 at 3:26 PM Lovely haiku for every season, Jan and Shane! I think autumn is my favorite, but I love them all...hugs, Rhonda Jan Allison January 15, 2015 at 3:28 PM Each of the seasons brings its own unique joys - thanks for the lovely comment Rhonda:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith January 15, 2015 at 2:51 PM Love the pic to go with the great poems...zip up your vest I hear it is windy there...hugs Tim Tim Smith January 15, 2015 at 2:56 PM I saw on the weather channel... They compared it to a hurricane Jan Allison January 15, 2015 at 2:53 PM I nearly got blown over walking back from mums - about 85 mph winds no boats, few planes no papers or post - have NEVER known it as bad as today:-( Hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen January 15, 2015 at 2:25 PM - Beautiful ........ for the whole year, Jan & Shane ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Jan Allison January 15, 2015 at 2:31 PM Thanks Anne Lise:-) Hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick January 15, 2015 at 2:04 PM Ahh!! If for a contest, reads like a winner..Very descriptive work..The collaboration is seamless..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Jan Allison January 15, 2015 at 2:17 PM Thanks Sara it is just for fun - Shane is quite new to the site and this is his first collaboration - I am REALLY pleased with the way it turned out for us:-) Hugs Jan xx