Seasons

A summer so hot,
The wind is always unfound,
The grass shrivals up.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Smith-Johnsen Avatar
May 4, 2009 at 7:18 PM
Congratulations for your honorable mention in Abe's Haiku Season's contest. Love, Dane
Neshat Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 4:35 PM
it made me smile, keep it up.
Augustus Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 2:09 PM
I completely agree with every word that's in your haiku. It's the very essence of summer in most places in this world. Congratulations on your well deserved placement in the Haiku Seasons contest.
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May 1, 2009 at 12:20 PM
Just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on being one of the winners in the haiku contest to my other comment. Enjoy your honor! Karen
Moreno Avatar
May 1, 2009 at 12:09 AM
Congrats with your HM in the contest...Nice job...Raul
Townsend Avatar
April 30, 2009 at 11:42 PM
Well done. Congratulations on the Honorable Mention. Nice writing. Smiles from Lolita
Moreno Avatar
April 22, 2009 at 11:28 AM
Sounds like the beginning of a drought, nice work and great use of imagery...Raul
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April 22, 2009 at 8:50 AM
So much truth here. That's why I prefer spring. Keep on writing! Best wishes. Karen
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