Seasons

Seasons in the sun,
Under the shade of willows;
Waiting for the moon.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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January 17, 2009 at 11:24 PM
Wonderful poem Daniel! I love the change of seasons...and waiting for the moon. ~Caramel
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January 15, 2009 at 7:28 PM
Nice use of imagery and personification in this one. Just found out you are Raul's nephew and that there are other relatives of yours here at The Soup. It must be fun to share your creative talents with each other. Good luck with your writing. Karen
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January 15, 2009 at 5:04 AM
Sun, moon and willow, absolutely gorgeous imagery. Love it! Love, Shar
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January 14, 2009 at 5:03 PM
Seasons are lovely to spend time in and write from each one endlessly...Raul
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