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Seasons

Seasons in the sun, Under the shade of willows; Waiting for the moon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/17/2009 11:24:00 PM
Wonderful poem Daniel! I love the change of seasons...and waiting for the moon. ~Caramel
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Date: 1/15/2009 7:28:00 PM
Nice use of imagery and personification in this one. Just found out you are Raul's nephew and that there are other relatives of yours here at The Soup. It must be fun to share your creative talents with each other. Good luck with your writing. Karen
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Date: 1/15/2009 5:04:00 AM
Sun, moon and willow, absolutely gorgeous imagery. Love it! Love, Shar
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Date: 1/14/2009 5:03:00 PM
Seasons are lovely to spend time in and write from each one endlessly...Raul
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