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Seasons

Seasons ever changing winter summer spring autumn water flows keeping in time

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/3/2008 5:45:00 PM
What a beautful reflection in just three lines. Good job! I enjoyed it. Karen
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Date: 12/3/2008 5:39:00 PM
Martial Acts..martial alluding to warlike..we were fencing...and the similiarity to the word marital..marriage, a play on words. Nae is the correct spelling for "not" Scottish dialect. Hied is the correct spelling for "to hasten" Mail,flexible body armor, not man. Sweat soaked embrace..is ..two sweaty people huggung..not sweet. Our first meeting was in a fight, a martial act..not marital. BUT I failed if you did not get any of the above..sorry Debbie aleezadelta@aol.com
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