Seasonal Storage

blanket’s on; it’s off and swept away from my touch in brumal’s closet 5/11/2022

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/13/2022 10:59:00 PM

brumal's closet is in every home in the world I bet! a restless sleep!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/14/2022 6:54:00 PM

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/12/2022 4:24:00 PM

I really like this one. Love when we can lose all the blankies!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/13/2022 9:25:00 AM

And the long pants too! Need shorts today :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/12/2022 12:03:00 PM

Wonderful images Kim! Often we have no idea what the season is going to do! Take the flannel sheets off or put them back on - get out the spring clothes or keep the winter things in the closet! Wonderful sense of ambivalence!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/13/2022 11:41:00 AM

That took courage Kim! I don't think I ready to take that step yet!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2022 1:29:00 PM

Our weather is well let’s wait and see weather too ;) Finally took the flannel sheets off. :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/12/2022 7:34:00 AM

Very clever. Not easy in a few words. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2022 8:39:00 AM

Thanks so much and hugs ~ Kim

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/12/2022 6:46:00 AM

Delightful, Haiku, dearest Kim. Be blessed!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2022 8:40:00 AM

Thank you! Be blessed, my dear friend!