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Seasonal Serpents

Senryu Series ~seasonal serpents slither in unsalted seas… reasons unseasoned ~serpent, psychosis permeate unsalted seas… carnal enmity ~emotion’s ocean many reasons unseasoned… thoughts expendable For and in Honor of Brian Strand And contest

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/26/2011 1:32:00 PM

Nice alliteration you have here and also quite a thought provoking write, John! I see you won with this, so Congrats :D

Jack Horne

Date: 7/23/2011 3:01:00 PM

Intriguing piece, John. Thanks - your contest was a lot of fun : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/22/2011 11:03:00 AM

VERy seasoned these are! And it looks like congratulations are in order. (I am so busy these days I don't even have time to go thru winner lists. It's killing me). So a big congrats to you and thanks so much for my win in your contest. It was an inspiring picture. Luv, Andrea

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/21/2011 1:42:00 PM

moe, you got me under a spell...miles of congrats on a well deserved award! :)huggs!

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 7/21/2011 8:08:00 AM

congratulations on your win! an engaging series on thoughts :)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/21/2011 6:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Moses. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/21/2011 6:30:00 AM

Congrats Moses my friend on a stunning win with a spectacular entry as these moving words.. u never cease to amaze me with your spirituality and essence luv..

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/21/2011 6:27:00 AM

Gosh John I really love this series of yours, the last one says so much.. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest ;) thank you for your kind comment (",)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/20/2011 10:02:00 PM

John, good luck in the contest.. enjoyed your poem,, have yourself a wonderful and blessed day,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/20/2011 3:27:00 PM

Wow! This is brilliant, John. In addition to the powerful message you have alliteration, internal rhyme and a classy layout. Wishing you success, my friend. Love, Carolyn