John Freeman Poet Senryu

Seasonal Serpents

Senryu Series

~seasonal serpents
       slither in unsalted seas…
             reasons unseasoned

~serpent, psychosis 
      permeate unsalted seas… 
             carnal enmity 

~emotion’s ocean
          many reasons unseasoned…
              thoughts expendable 

For and in Honor of Brian Strand
And contest

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Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 26, 2011 at 1:32 PM Nice alliteration you have here and also quite a thought provoking write, John! I see you won with this, so Congrats :D

Jack Horne July 23, 2011 at 3:01 PM Intriguing piece, John. Thanks - your contest was a lot of fun : )

Andrea Dietrich July 22, 2011 at 11:03 AM VERy seasoned these are! And it looks like congratulations are in order. (I am so busy these days I don't even have time to go thru winner lists. It's killing me). So a big congrats to you and thanks so much for my win in your contest. It was an inspiring picture. Luv, Andrea

Nette Onclaud July 21, 2011 at 1:42 PM moe, you got me under a spell...miles of congrats on a well deserved award! :)huggs!

Black Eyed Susan July 21, 2011 at 8:08 AM congratulations on your win! an engaging series on thoughts :)

Carol Sunshine Brown July 21, 2011 at 6:31 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Moses. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 21, 2011 at 6:30 AM Congrats Moses my friend on a stunning win with a spectacular entry as these moving words.. u never cease to amaze me with your spirituality and essence luv..

Wilma Neels July 21, 2011 at 6:27 AM Gosh John I really love this series of yours, the last one says so much.. Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest ;) thank you for your kind comment (",)

Poet Destroyer A July 20, 2011 at 10:02 PM John, good luck in the contest.. enjoyed your poem,, have yourself a wonderful and blessed day,..p.d.

Carolyn Devonshire July 20, 2011 at 3:27 PM Wow! This is brilliant, John. In addition to the powerful message you have alliteration, internal rhyme and a classy layout. Wishing you success, my friend. Love, Carolyn