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Seasonal Palindromes

Name now one man who doesn't love a sunrise, The bright sun when it does peep out in summer, It sure does wow the human eyes, And by noon time, leaves one warmer; Autumn sees beautiful colours aplenty, The leaves turn brighter and redder by the day, Golden branches shed their level leaves gently, Dewed yellow and brown cascade down all the way; On Christmas Eve , the sun's hardly seen, Children plan to play with a Santa at NASA , The heater's rotator blows warmly and green Is the Christmas tree all aglow ere the salsa; Spring comes with its deified hope and no strife, Fresh new flowers come up on the radar views, Saw tide rose, so red it was , full of life, Now, in words drown I , with help from my muse. 10/05/18

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Date: 10/25/2018 7:58:00 AM
CONGRATS Jo to win on your great poem.
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Date: 10/24/2018 7:45:00 PM
Jo, congratulations on your great win in this palindromes contest.. great rhyme and imagery
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Date: 10/24/2018 3:36:00 PM
A very clever use of the palindromes, Jo. I particularly loved the first two verses and admire you for also producing rhyming poetry for this challenge!
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Date: 10/24/2018 2:46:00 PM
Beautiful write on the seasons Jo..Very nicely done..Congrats on your win..
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Date: 10/24/2018 2:29:00 PM
Congrats on your top win, Jo. Well done.
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Date: 10/6/2018 3:30:00 AM
WoW!Jo, You did such a good job with contest theme. Your imagery and content is top notch. You made it look easy, I found it to be challenging. I enjoyed reading your poetry again. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/5/2018 12:02:00 PM
Lovely piece Jo, so well penned indeed with nice rhyme too. Trust you're well, I was at hospital yesterday and good news my PSA is down to 0.4 so don't go back for 4 months. B!Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 10/5/2018 10:29:00 AM
Beautiful rhythm in your words and wonderful imagery throughout..well executed poem, Jo.
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Date: 10/5/2018 9:39:00 AM
Wow Jo, this was so cool. I loved everything about this. What a masterful job you did with this, I know this couldn't have been easy to do so bravo my friend. This was fantastic.
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