Seasonal Palindromes

Name now one man who doesn't love a sunrise,
The bright sun when it does peep  out in summer,
It sure does wow  the human eyes,
And by noon  time, leaves one warmer;

Autumn sees  beautiful colours aplenty,
The leaves turn brighter and redder  by the day,
Golden branches shed their level  leaves gently,
Dewed  yellow and brown cascade down all the way;

On Christmas Eve , the sun's hardly seen,
Children plan to play with a Santa at NASA ,
The heater's rotator  blows warmly and green 
Is the Christmas tree all aglow ere  the salsa;

Spring comes with its deified  hope and no strife,
Fresh new flowers come up on the radar  views,
Saw tide rose, so red it was , full of life,
Now, in words drown I , with help from my muse.


10/05/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dutta Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 7:58 AM
CONGRATS Jo to win on your great poem.
Roper Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 7:45 PM
Jo, congratulations on your great win in this palindromes contest.. great rhyme and imagery
Watson Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 3:36 PM
A very clever use of the palindromes, Jo. I particularly loved the first two verses and admire you for also producing rhyming poetry for this challenge!
May Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 2:46 PM
Beautiful write on the seasons Jo..Very nicely done..Congrats on your win..
Gauthier Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 2:29 PM
Congrats on your top win, Jo. Well done.
Y. Avatar
October 6, 2018 at 3:30 AM
WoW!Jo, You did such a good job with contest theme. Your imagery and content is top notch. You made it look easy, I found it to be challenging. I enjoyed reading your poetry again. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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October 5, 2018 at 12:02 PM
Lovely piece Jo, so well penned indeed with nice rhyme too. Trust you're well, I was at hospital yesterday and good news my PSA is down to 0.4 so don't go back for 4 months. B!Blessings,Gordon
Pandit Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 10:29 AM
Beautiful rhythm in your words and wonderful imagery throughout..well executed poem, Jo.
Green Avatar
October 5, 2018 at 9:39 AM
Wow Jo, this was so cool. I loved everything about this. What a masterful job you did with this, I know this couldn't have been easy to do so bravo my friend. This was fantastic.
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