Seasonal Migrations

Confusion abounds

       rain commingles with sunshine,

            winter greets the spring...


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March 14, 2011 at 11:31 AM
After a very super weekend I am back at the soup reading. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Jay. There are so many diverse writers here and I am so happy I am able to read most of them. Have a wonderful week and may you find what you are looking for in life and in your writing. Love, Carol
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March 13, 2011 at 9:14 PM
Interesting wording evoking striking image, Jay! Great Haiku! Be well, Caroline.
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March 13, 2011 at 3:50 PM
Very accurate description of winter making way for spring, Jay. The confusion seems to arise most when it warms up and then there is a late season snowfall. Love, carolyn
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March 13, 2011 at 3:47 PM
A very nice image and write on spring ....
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March 13, 2011 at 3:18 PM
a bustling piece with stylish lines that welcome the fisrt tweets of spring! you make me 'ku , jay... lovely! :) huggs, nette
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