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Seasonal Migrations

Confusion abounds rain commingles with sunshine, winter greets the spring... *

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/14/2011 11:31:00 AM

After a very super weekend I am back at the soup reading. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Jay. There are so many diverse writers here and I am so happy I am able to read most of them. Have a wonderful week and may you find what you are looking for in life and in your writing. Love, Carol

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 3/13/2011 9:14:00 PM

Interesting wording evoking striking image, Jay! Great Haiku! Be well, Caroline.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/13/2011 3:50:00 PM

Very accurate description of winter making way for spring, Jay. The confusion seems to arise most when it warms up and then there is a late season snowfall. Love, carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/13/2011 3:47:00 PM

A very nice image and write on spring ....

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/13/2011 3:18:00 PM

a bustling piece with stylish lines that welcome the fisrt tweets of spring! you make me 'ku , jay... lovely! :) huggs, nette