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Seasonal Migrations

Confusion abounds rain commingles with sunshine, winter greets the spring... *

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/14/2011 11:31:00 AM
After a very super weekend I am back at the soup reading. I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Jay. There are so many diverse writers here and I am so happy I am able to read most of them. Have a wonderful week and may you find what you are looking for in life and in your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/13/2011 9:14:00 PM
Interesting wording evoking striking image, Jay! Great Haiku! Be well, Caroline.
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Date: 3/13/2011 3:50:00 PM
Very accurate description of winter making way for spring, Jay. The confusion seems to arise most when it warms up and then there is a late season snowfall. Love, carolyn
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Date: 3/13/2011 3:47:00 PM
A very nice image and write on spring ....
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Date: 3/13/2011 3:18:00 PM
a bustling piece with stylish lines that welcome the fisrt tweets of spring! you make me 'ku , jay... lovely! :) huggs, nette
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