Frederic Parker Poet Rhyme

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Contest-September Sestet 

Sponsor- Andrea Dietrich

Seasonal Change -SS

As green leaves of August begin to change
The South winds of Summer plan to escape
September's North winds blow to rearrange
all the dying petals in the landscape
Where night skies grow a thinner, somber cloud
of duskier sunsets dressed in a shroud

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Sara Kendrick October 1, 2025 at 8:37 AM Creative winning work. Way to go. Congratulations on being on the winners' list. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich September 30, 2025 at 11:53 AM Thanks for your entry in my contest. Congratulations

Anne-Lise Andresen September 30, 2025 at 2:08 AM - Back with a congrats, Frederic :) - hugs

sara Etgen-Baker September 17, 2025 at 6:08 PM breathtaking imagery in each line! I especially liked "north winds blow to rearrange all the dying petals.' so accurate. best wishes with the contest, Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen September 17, 2025 at 12:29 PM - A beautiful seasonal change, Frederic :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely autumn :) - hugs