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Seaside Magic

I will be the waves
and you, you will be the sand.
I’ll fall into you.

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Poet Destroyer A

December 21, 2012 at 9:03 PM

The best way to fall is invited by magic. Love this senryu;-). Rollo, my warmest thoughts and best wishes go out to you and your family. Have yourself a Merry Christmas and a very Happy New Year* Always & Forever ;-) PD

Andrea Dietrich

December 21, 2012 at 5:55 PM

you really should have a book of all these marvelous senryu and put a very romantic title on the book (if you don't have such a book already) this is so beautiful.

Rollo West

December 21, 2012 at 6:02 PM

Hi Andrea, thank you so much for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

December 21, 2012 at 7:01 AM

nice Rollo fall gently though xx

Rollo West

December 21, 2012 at 12:12 PM

Hi Mandy, thank you for stopping by, and I will fall gently. Rollo

Jon A Cavanaugh

December 21, 2012 at 6:16 AM

Love the imagery Rollo. Great write.

Rollo West

December 21, 2012 at 12:12 PM

Hi jon, Thank you so much for stopping by and commenting. Rollo

Russell Sivey

December 21, 2012 at 6:01 AM

I just love, love this romantic write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly wondrous and enlightening poem this morning! What a powerful image you paint into my mind each time I read this poem! This is really a very fantastic piece Rollo, I really loved it! Great Work!!

Rollo West

December 21, 2012 at 12:13 PM

Hello my friend, and thank you for stopping by and your great comment. Rollo